Tomorrow's Muse
The pleasure is all mine to have you stop by. Hope the bite would make at least a mouthful
oh, it did--will be chewing on this for a while!
The cycle of life! The brightness, spriteness, gaiety , lightness and musicality of the first stanza soon give way to words and imageries of gloom (trudge, no escape, droning) till exit - wreath and yellow wood. A good poem but one that depresses in the end with its view of life, living and dying - but a good poem all the same!
soporific gaze.
Nice poem. Loved it. Keep writing, bro!
Highly appreciated
nel
This is the sort of material I appreciate geneza nazwy slask
I can't bring the pieces together, not from searching for meaning, but from wanting to be "hit."
Yet, must I always be hit? I do think I must be hit though to judge a particular piece excellent, for I do judge of myself an arbiter, even the arbiter, the most accurate!
I hoped to be taken somewhere surreal and alluring by tomorrow's muse that presented herself tonight, and yet I couldn't!
I'll just pass this on, Nsisong!
Thank you for your comment
Maybe it's a trade-off and do you consider that 'maybe' surrealism would not have been in tandem with the realism of the meaning...maybe, maybe...
Very nice poem, dense with images I could bite into. Glad I stopped for a visit.
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