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An Early Morning Stroll

Nsisong Effiong14 May 2012
The cold wind whips across my face, dreams rouse lazily in my eyes, priming her meddling grip on my mind, Readying me for yet another race. I sigh, wondering how long I'll keep at her games yet not sure I'd like to break free from her bind.
A man angrily blares his car horn against a defiant bike hustling for his charge; A street hawker beckons me to her wares and I reward her with a casual wave; The Mai-ruwa pushes life along oblivious of what I see, the bird on the fence strutting around another that pays no attention.
Everybody is busy barely noticing the mist that clings stubbornly like the guilt of last night sins,
I keep on walking
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Responses11 responses
oreoluwade14 May 2012

Good one bro. On the spot execution I suppose. Thanks for sharing.

Nsisong Effiong14 May 2012

I appreciate your comment. Do have a lovely day

Daystar14 May 2012

I like this, but let's get to the end, just can't wait. Keep it up.

emitons14 May 2012

Nice, let's c wat d afternoon bring

Kabolobari14 May 2012

We keep walking and working and waking to keep the routine and almost always ignore the lessons nature is teaching us.

Your man took notice of an isolated bird which may have sought notice; and, ah, she noticed him too.

Even if he keeps walking and working and waking, at least he takes notice. And, he can end a sweet romantic session each morning for a day of walking and working and some noticing as part of his routine of earning a living.

A miniature composition with sufficient details, yet we do not ask what he may mean, but let it hit and stick that'll hit and stick, which does and is my delight.

Keep walking.

I should like to think that the defiant okada is hustling for his "change". Because earning from okada can be small?

I look forward to a day when we can have many mornings for just strolling and keeping atouch with nature and living rather than endless lifelong earning of living as if God created an enterprise as life...

Then the morning mist that hang tenaciously some morning will remind us of how freshness is lasting, not of last night sins and persistent guilt.

Nsisong Effiong14 May 2012

I agree! You never can tell which way the mindless meddling of his dreams will lead the afternoon to.

Nsisong Effiong14 May 2012

Wow! Thank you for opening my eyes to bright new vistas which I could have possibly been only subliminally aware of as I penned this piece.
Your interpretation is truly refreshing
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zsa14 May 2012

Good stuff! Luv how it lingers on...

Nsisong Effiong14 May 2012

How can it not linger when your thougtful comment will serve to kindle the fire

Nsisong Effiong14 May 2012

i'm glad you love it. You can take us on a detour or lead us to any destination of your choice

temiladealade15 May 2012

On point.
The sun is at its zenith
And i relish my air conditioned office
I would give anything to get a cold drink
If leaving my cool cocoon won't feature
These feelings
Herald the Afternoon.

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